Black Poetry : **** Baby

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Versatile, Jul 11, 2005.

  1. Versatile

    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** baby
    What is it you do to me
    What is that thing
    That you do to me
    This is the _expression of my confession
    The healing of the feeling
    Of this thing that you do to me
    I posess and caress
    The love that you give to me
    That hypnotic state that you put me in
    When my fingers ease inbetween
    The palm of your hands
    Just so that i can touch
    The tips of your fingers
    To give birth to that feeling
    Of the closeness between us
    That endless perfection
    That you and I
    We strive for this stimulation
    Of the education of our hearts
    So that we can become
    One being, one mind, one soul
    Dancing to this rhythm
    Of rhythmical love
    That excites me so
    Causing a reaction of my
    Blood to race under my skin
    **** Baby
    When you're in the essence of my presence
    My butterflies are replaced with that of comfort
    Out of a million people i can only see you
    When i make love to that mic
    Baby your my audience
    I perform for the support of your ears
    **** Baby
    You're so clueless
    As to what your relentless attention does to me
    You hear me
    You catch my words in your mind
    While I observe what i deserve
    But never had like this before
    Reality hits me with this joy of tears
    When i say
    **** Baby
    What is it you do to me
    What is that thing that you do to me
    This is the _expression of my confession
    The healing of the feeling
    The rising of my sun
    YOu see, i wake up with thoughts of you embezzeled in me
    The begining of the end
    And to disclose let me expose
    The connotation of this thing
    That you do to me
    It's like
    You awaken the very core of my soul
    Opening my eyelids
    To the endless possibilities of you and I
    You see
    My heart is no longer mine
    But it rests within the protection of you
    You are my security
    Which leaves me asking this question
    **** baby
    What is it you do to me
    Cause
    Whatever it is
    You've created a creation of the appreciation
    That i will
    Forever Have
    Only for you
    This feeling could only meanone thing
    And that is.....i love you
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Love can do wonders and bring a new day forth to heart from a heart
    tyte poetic flow of thy baby ......wow !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That last line sums it up, seems like love to me. This expression was vividly awesome poet.
     
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    nice flowing...i enjoyed this piece alot thanks for sharing....Angel
     
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    well *** baby that was a nice flow. Very nice. Had me hook the whole way. Much love for this....much love.
     
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    MY BAD//

    i HAD HIM MESMERIZED..
    GOT HIM COUGHT UP IN MY THIGHS..
    HE LOOKED INTO MY EYES,
    AND HE LOST HIS HEART,
    NOW OUR SOULS MUST NEVER PART!

    LOVED THE DROP..
     
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    re:Baby

    Versatile, This is a beautiful poem. I read it twice . Very Lovely. :smokin:
     
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    peace,

    powerfully written, could only come from a versatile mind.................

    tyte!
     
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