Black Poetry : Baby

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IlladelThug, Jan 28, 2005.

  1. IlladelThug

    IlladelThug Active Member MEMBER

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    Shorty look, I wuz thinkin bout a change
    You.. Me.. maybe a blockbuster film and some flames
    No friends, just silence, plus moonlight peekin thru shades
    Smoke clouds, hovering above deep conversations.. we'll blaze
    Sound good to you? Hope so, if not, lemme convince ya
    Weve been close for seven years, first met in December
    I remember it, down to the design of the room when u entered
    Your outfit was see-thru, mixed wit green and blue in the center
    Plus your fragrence wuz... lets just say seductive to my senses
    And when i said "its a pleasure to meet you", i really meant it
    You changed my life, unfortuantely for better AND worst
    But its all good, cuz when wit u, the worst felt better at first
    Now you stay by my side like hips, movin under tint
    Doin thingz to me you really shouldnt, but i never take offense
    When we first chilled, i wuz a virgin who aint know what to do
    You taught me a lot.. had me rollin, different wayz to improve
    Said you wuz down for threesomes, and bisexual activity
    But dayum.. i didnt know, you meant the ish literally
    Which is what i luv bout you baby, your never the same
    Sex is off the hook, but you can put me to sleep wit da brain
    When i hit it, you know whuts up, no need for description
    So freaky, i dont even get on my knees when im lickin
    And you still get wet.............. convinced yet?

    If so, i just rented a flick n gotta a dutch split.. u can hop in dat!undefined
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow this piece took me there !
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummmm..........convinced yet? good ending brotha.........freaky!.........one love
     
  4. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this sounds like something my man told me when we met 8yrs ago...lol...good job!
     
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