Black Poetry : baby

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Apr 30, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    talking to you a light shines through
    and oh your smile just makes me feel warm
    your thick brown lips so kissable and soft
    your voice just like a lullaby
    i can fall asleep hearing it in my ear
    telling me that i am safe here with you
    i hear your voice and i close my eyes
    listening to the night sounds as the warmth of your body
    surrounds my heart
    and the light that shines all around you
    becomes a light that shines within' me
    my protector, my friend
    making love and mixing the colors of our skin
    honey brown and chocolate cake
    a sweet mix of sounds and tastes
    transcending all time and space
    until we breach this atmosphere
    our time together will remain clear
    in our minds eye...in the quiet smiles
    in the sparkle that says this could be love
     
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    SWEET BABY

    I really dig this sweet loving poem-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet like a rainbow of beauty
    keep flowin'
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading me...
     
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    remarkable, really feeling this flow peace and blessins
     
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    lovely. liked it.
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sereni - purple...thank you so much for feeling my work....
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really love this...its so peaceful and sweet.....:)
     
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    Red~

    Who got chu writing lines like this???

    "in the quiet smiles
    in the sparkle that says this could be love"

    That was my fav line.

    Lovin it!
    Reas
     
  10. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks reason...i don't know who has me writing like this, but i am in a mellow mood these days.
     
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