Black Poetry : Baby You must choose me over BOB!

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey baby. I can’t stop thinking about you.
    You’re in my mind and I care what you do.
    I don’t like you being with and spending
    so much of your time with BOB.

    He does nothing unless you show him.
    He lies around all day and waits
    for you to get home.

    Why should he get all of your attention?

    Often he has no energy to take you out.
    I have to do that because he is out of energy.

    Why you treat me this way?

    He can’t love you like I do.
    Hold you in his arms and caress you like me.

    He can’t cook
    or take you to
    the fancy places I can.

    I just don’t see what BOB has over me. :bowdown:

    Come the day if you ever say I do.
    Your Battery Operated Boyfriend ( BOB ) is out.
    And will get no more time with you.
     
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    Wow.... that was cute!!! Oh...Bob had all her attention, huh?
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When she told me there was BOB in her life. I said " huh? " Who is BOB? Then she pulled out that tool.

    Yes she was telling me she didn't need me. She has BOB. That hurt my ego, makes me want to sob. That is one electronic gadget that needs to be eliminated. :thanks: Thanks for the read.
     
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    Now, throughout this piece I was wondering, who is this BOB person, or is it really a person at all? Then when I got to the ending, I thought, oh no he didn't, lol, lol. I think most would choose the real deal over a substitute brotha. Very witty and well posed piece, I enjoyed this.
     
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    Hodee... sorry she hurt yo ego...she was just a different type of a girl.. that all... it was all her... and not you.

    BTW... who thought of that gadget anyway????
     
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    and i thought it was the KAT looooooool




    realy i tought while i was reading it must be the kat..
    you showed at the family picture book....




    but this was nice brother Hodee :heart:






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was funny Hodee! Hide the batteries and spank her! :whip: !
     
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    hahahahahaha!!!!!
    man...that is some serious truth right there...
     
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    lol i like this....this was cute :welldone:
     
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    LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!. You had me with this one.
     
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