Black Poetry : Baby Tell Me

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We were suppose to be together, but i know something is up, yo mind be kinda twisted,what u thinkin about, is it me, or somebody else, don't keep stuff to yourself, u know i know u, so tell me boo, what happened dat night, why u ran off so fast, i really wanted da moment to last, with a special candlelight dinner for two, with me and u boo, toastin champaygne in da moonlight, makin love in da middle of da night, whats on yo mind, if its me then i can understand that, i really wanted to take the time to get dat chance of romance, sit down and talk to me for a minute, u seem a bit nervous, what u nervous about baby, nothin to be afraid about, do u have feelings for me, i don't know if i feel da same way, i'm speechless, but i can't deny, the way u look into my eyes, u hynotize me, i'm blushin now, what can i do, just give me one kiss, da love in da air erupts, two hearts beat, u're my earth, wind, and fire, my secret admirer, can we hold each other, love one another, be together forever, is it possible? I want our dreams to come tru, dis is not the end of da fantasy world, i wanna be yo girl, anything u want, u got me, u have nothing else to ask for, u got what i want, now what about u? Do u want to be with a girl, who can toss u in and out, give u a spin, a scream or shout, a holla, without a doubt, i'll turn your insides out, so tell me sweetie, do u want me so bad that you can't sleep at night, u need someone to hug u tight, who u can love all night long, in da middle of a song, if that's u boo, then we got a connection, sweet perfection of love and lust, can't make da fire turn into dust.

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  2. Mind~$oul

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    I mos def can relate to this piece

    like ya style

    one luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i felt ya here i know dis so well ...

    tell it all
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    of all tha times i felt like this-
    i couldnt explain this well....

    but you obviously did girl....
    tell it like it is mami!!!!


    1 luv
     
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    "NICE"

    I feel ya on this one, really nice scribe.... Keep expressing from within
    Queen
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  6. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks rich, lurk, mind$oul, and aqueenpassing 4 da sweet thoughts.

    1 luv

    AM
     
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