Quiet Poetry Lounge : baby tears...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by plainrhythm, Oct 26, 2005.

  1. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's been a while, been going through alot... but... i'm here...

    inhaling emotions of unexplainable realities,
    your words are spoken and fear... you may
    never love again, they took your
    smile and created the metamorphasis of
    of hurt... instantly, your anger became the greater good.
    Little Child, Melancholy stood there.
    Come and see what I see everyday, on the other side of silence,
    The bruise which faded quicker than that of your cheek.

    this is real short... but... i'm slowly going into the swing of things...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    short yet well said and felt..............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You don't necessarily need a lot of words to convey your thoughts. I felt the deep ache in this piece poet.
     
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    uppin dis one back !
     
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