Black Poetry : BABY TALK

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BABY TALK



    A diary of my life kept underneath me
    Never being heard

    I keep secrets from my elders
    Not mature enough to have an opinion
    Ignored by sound
    Heard by thunder

    Thoughts wonder in music
    My raging hormones scream for cupid
    Too young for menopause
    Too old for tantrums
    Not ready to become a woman

    School bores me
    Boys tease me
    Not thin enough for prom queen
    Not smart enough for valedictorian
    Not pretty enough to hide the flaws in me

    I want to fight
    But then I want to hide
    My friends clash with my style
    I’m not ready to be on my own
    But I still have a need to feel free

    I have a long way to go
    A whole lot to see
    Experience to help me grow
    My parents to guide me,
    When life’s breeze stops blowing for me
     
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    once again i see why ur our poet of the week
    ya scribe is awesome and mad tyte.............
     
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    Don't you think she should be made Queen for another week?
     
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    :kiss1: Rich and Ibrahim you guys are too sweet to me:kiss1:
    Thank you brothers for the love and support:kiss1:
     
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    your truly a talented writer flow on my sista!!!!!!!!!!1:kiss1:
     
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    Thank you for the love nevar always:kiss1:
     
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    Nicely put
    We cant be perfect in all eyes
    This was a wonderful piece
     
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    :kiss1: Thank you Tantrum:kiss1:
     
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    This is so well-written.
    nice work poet of the week
     
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    Thank you sweet baby _face:spin:
     
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