Black Poetry : Baby Steps

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  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby steps
    i learned to take
    but not at the age of two
    i had to learn to walk that way
    because i felled in love with you
    not having this feeling
    in such a long time
    threw me for a loop
    nearly blew my mind

    to be in love again
    no, that was not for me
    love had hurt so many times
    my heart could nott conceive
    to candlelight and quiet whispers
    to soft music flowing
    champagne and chocolate things
    these things my heart not knowing
    I THINK
    i rememberr these things
    or was it a dream
    candlelight and quiet whispers
    or
    fire and screams
    nightmares, not dreams
    not to music flowing
    but to mad melody unknowing
    maybe then not champagne
    something that made a stain
    something with bubbles
    or was is suds
    with chocolate covering
    faking to be love

    be patient with my baby steps
    i know they slow and short
    i am only human
    but a women of heart
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow..
    posed well..
    understanding these baby steps..:angel1:
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks mzblkangel i starting a new relationship and i didnt know another way to say it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful piece
    the steps is sweet and gentle as ur heart
    nice flow on !!
     
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    whisper, this is so beautiful in its honesty. I feel where you're coming from. Missed you, girl - glad you're back. :)
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $RICH$ and gempis. its good to be back
    this family is always my sword of words
     
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