Black Poetry : Baby Please Dont Walk Away

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  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    Crying:
    Because in my heart Im dying
    Sobbing:
    How my pain is throbbing
    Screaming:
    How my life is dreaming
    Since the day you went away,my whole life has been so grey
    I can not laugh,I can not sigh
    All I want to do is lay right down and die
    The pain is too intense,
    So to others i build this fence
    To block away my sorrow, and hide away my pain
    But oh how slowly do i become so insane
    My sorrow a misery so intense
    My heart never had an effective defense
    I fell for you,and you for me
    Our love should have lasted for all enternity
    For another,you fell
    Sending my lonely heart into an endless firey hell
    TAke away my sorrow,wash away my tears
    I can not love another,when my heart still lingers here
    Give me back my heart,please dont throw it away
    I love you so completely
    Baby please dont walk away.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelings tell the truth....

    and sometimes it's hard to not
    receive love in return -- but
    sometimes it's best to let them
    walk away and move through the
    grieving process of a lost love...
    Feelin' ya' deeply on this piece
    here....nicely scribed!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN BLACKLOVE VERY EMOTIONAL PIECE
    OF MISSED LOVE WE ALL HAVE TO ALLOW
    LOVE TO WALK AWAY THEN KEEP IT
    SOMETYME IT HURTS BUT FOR THE BETTER
    VERY POWERFUL ............
     
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