Black Poetry : Baby Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DaFlavaFul, Oct 13, 2002.

  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He tipped my scales
    and crushed my pedestal
    shattered my world into a million rose petals
    raised my temperature
    catched my smiles
    caressed my body
    produced a thousand sighs....aaahh!

    he is vibrant
    and strong and his voice hummms
    to the music of congo drums
    rhythm is his essence
    as his body moves and groove
    to the vibes
    that rides
    his proud high cheeks and carves his strong nubian back.

    he makes me wanna Ooooh!
    and mmmm yeah!
    my heart a-flutter with his constant stare
    his touch - makes me feel
    his tongue - liquid heat
    mind - mesmerize
    his body -pleasurize

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    Wait hold up!
    Zoii girl what u doing?

    That boy is too young for you,
    robbing the cradle is against the rules
    better back up
    dont loose ur cool
    please dont go stealing that chiles youth.
    i know he is fine
    i know he looks good
    but baby girl dont get shook
    this fella aint got for you.

    I know ,I know
    what i should do
    but oooh he look so **** good
    but then again he is too young for me to Do.
    ima let him go, do his thing
    aint got no right messing with this kid
    aww **** !
    why he gotta be 19?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it be dat way sometime but flow on anyway!
     
  3. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hafta agree with Rich..it do... lol

    this is a tyte peice and i especially love these lines:

    "He tipped my scales
    and crushed my pedestal
    shattered my world into a million rose petals"

    that is just hot ta def...
     
  4. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall ,much obliged!
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL

    good poem
     
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