Black Poetry : Baby I Surrender

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby,
    Everyday i think about you,
    While i'm gone, i wish u're here with me,
    Lonely and without you,
    No one comes close than you,
    I stare at yout picture all the time,
    Baby,
    I just can't find the reason why,
    Maybe its because i like you so much,
    Or could it be a dream,
    That i want to be with you,
    And with nobody else,
    It's something about you,
    That turns me on,
    Baby i surrender,
    One day i dreamed that we made love,
    It felt so real and enlightening,
    Woke up, and i started touching my body,
    I yearn for you day and night,
    I'll be so happy when we finally meet,
    I wouldn't waste a minute,
    A warm gentle hug,
    And a sweet luscious kiss,
    A little music, we'll be getting it on,
    Cuddling up to each other on the sofa,
    My arms around you, while u caress my belly button,
    We start rubbing each other down with lotion,
    Turning each other on, getting my body in motion,
    Slowly getting wet in between my thighs,
    U look up at me and i look into your eyes,
    Stroking me deeper, and deeper,
    I'm moaning screaming oooh baby,
    We start kissing and embracing each other,
    Like there's no tomorrow,
    I'm saying baby don't stop,
    Harder u strokin me, slowly loving me,
    Baby I surrender all my love to you,
    Tossing and turning,
    Legs are humbly twitching,
    I'm beginning to climax,
    Love me harder, deeper,
    Arms wrapped around u tightly,
    Sleeping into the night.


    Aaliyahmonet aka: Shalonda
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet divine feelings when the mind & body lone
    for that someone da heart love so dear...............
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just keepin it real as always. i'm glad to see you again. keep lookin out 4 me.
     
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    U know i will sis , no doubt !
     
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    Sleep into the night
    Erase my past
    Fear not your love
    Your love is all that I have
    When I surrender
    Warm your body in this frigid December
    Give you strokes you'll always remember
    See the signs
    Guides love like symbols
    Virgos the sign
    I love September
    Baby your fine
    Your pics so vivid
    Blowing my mind
    Like little kids on christmas
    Unwrap and you find
    What you have been missing
    Arms wrapped around u tightly,
    Sleeping into the night.

    Much Love My Beautiful
    Midwest Sista
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feeling that tantrum. much love to u and rich.
     
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    love the flow, flow on poet.:spinstar:
     
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    aaliyah, capturing so much bliss very nice write. D.S.
     
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    A sultry, saucy drop here sis, do flow on.
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all very much. much love. :)
     
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