Black Poetry : baby daddy blues (1st post in a long time)

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  1. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    an unplanned pregancy
    and an unexpected joy
    nine months of loneliness
    just me and my baby boy
    wishin' things could be different
    wonderin' how it all went wrong
    double the responsibility
    cause my baby's daddy is gone
    if i could have things my way
    you and i would get along fine
    don't want to be with you
    just don't want to argue all the time
    wish you'd just rub my belly
    tell us it will be okay
    or be there to massage my feet
    when i've had a stressful day

    pregnancy has changed my life
    in ways that i can't explain
    i find myself trying to balance
    the joys and the pain
    and no matter how angry i am
    or down with the "baby daddy blues"
    i could never say to our son
    "your daddy don't love you..."
    so... you have two more months to go
    before our son arrives
    i hope you get your act together
    and make up your mind
    :kick:
    sometimes i regret it all too
    wishin' it could have been another season
    but then i think that God
    must have made it this way for a reason
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey yall!!!

    hello everyone... it's been a long time since i've posted on destee. i hope you haven't forgotten me yet. i see a lot of old faces and some new ones too. this is just something that i've been meaning to write for awhile now but it's been so long since i've wrote anything... i'm kinda rusty. anyway, this is something very real to me that i am experiencing right now. hope you enjoy it.
     
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    welcome back u never forgotton within happy to be reading u again welcome back home
    this was well felt , sis don't stay away so long next time
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Rich. i had a dry spell. had to go expereince life so i could have something to write about. i'm 7 (almost 8) months pregnant now. so i'll be having lots to write about soon. just hope i can find the time between feeding, changing and bathing...
     
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    aww .......


    heartfeld...



    be strong ...


    stay close to god....

    yes i have a close friend who went trough the same thing...


    heavy but she is so.......happy now...



    she met someone.......
    everything is good...now...






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    Doesn't sound like you are rusty at all. This was such an emotive piece, it flowed so genuinely and somberly. Congratulations to you on the new life well on his way. Flow on poet.
     
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    thanks for the love. i really haven't written anything an over a year.
     
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    awwww.....this is so sad. This sounds like something my mama said that said to my daddy. I am really feeling this poem and I hope that everything works out at least for your little boy's sake. God bless you.
     
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    krazylyrics

    thanks krazylyrics... although i can't help the way that i feel about him, i know that without him there it will still work out fine. i just moved back from atlanta about two months ago. are you from there? what part do you stay in?
     
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    If you were rusty my sister poet then ya flow is laced with alot of WD-40 LOL
    take it from a man who was raised by a single mom.."You will be ok" :bball:
     
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