Black Poetry : Baby Boy?...Be A Man

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Men........
    Man....uh naw
    Baby Boy
    yea yea that fit you quite nicely ya dig this title
    Because I see you as that a baby boy not strong like grandpas rifle
    Walk around with ya *** all out thinkin it's a trend
    Well let me tell you what you doin lettin these *** chasers know you feelin it because that's what they do in prison
    Sittin outside smokin trippin wit ya boys off some coke and eyes blood shot when ya chokin
    Do you really think you a token?
    Some yaw is out here workin wit' somethin yea you know what I'm talkin bout got girls screamin' they lungs out
    But is it really that good when they poppin out ya babies and callin you a ***
    Once the checks come and the baby take ya last name you don't call no mo'
    Sleep around everynight at a new victims house stankin up the couch
    Don't wanna give ya share in helpin to care
    So you stroll on to the next home ya boy Rome
    He just as stupid as you and carelessly makin the same mistakes
    Only he better off at a fast food stop flippin steaks
    Mama felt proud of you once said you was her favorite son
    Now you just askin for money everyday and chasin' her smiles away
    Sympathy on you fool because you lazy
    Not trying to correct yourself thoughts just hazy
    Started back in highschool when you got into a fight bruised up the boy real bad like Tyson but you didn't bite.
    Got everybody's respect and dropped your intellect
    Dropped
    That's it outta school left all the books and knowledge like a fool
    Think you a man because you 18 years old?
    Like stale bread you will start to mold
    Into something rotten not good at all
    You've destroyed your life like the mirror on the wall
    Ask her who's the greatest of all........
    "Not you boy,because you still play with toys and front infront of ya boys"
    Sad because the truth is life's too short and you missed out on something grand
    Baby Boy?.....Be A Man
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just had to let this one out you may or may not see another one like this lol
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is sadly true for some young men, sometimes you just gotta flow it as you see it, keep writing, I'll keep reading.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It feels good to know I have your support :hot:
    and I will neva let my pen down
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya it's one of the twisted affects of some younger men
     
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