Black Poetry : Baby Blues

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Jan 13, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fashioned
    Old-fashioned

    Baby blues.

    Sunrise
    peaks across
    waking flesh
    bends along wide contours
    contasts into dull textures and
    slips under the sheets.... rustles with
    the sleeping .................................tickling
    the barefoot soul which is free from restraint
    licking delicate folds reaching for swollen eyes and
    finds
    empty spaces
    to fill

    Baby blues.

    Fashioned
    Old-fashioned
    jeans




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  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling the artistic delivery you are so versed at

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin' da main frame

    of ya poetic hand u flip da scribe so well !:)
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why thank you DSSNY! :) I'm always tryin' to expand my horizons .... :D

    Thanks for the comps! :wink:


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    flippin' da script.... as you say - huh?! :wink: :lol: Well, I don't know about all dat, but I do know... that I thank you for readin' this piece!


    Always :heart:

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  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    expansion as you say...out the box...and onto a whole 'nother poetic realm. nice.

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  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) :) :) :) Thank you for the read Blak!! :) :) :) :)


    Always :heart:

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