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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baby
    i'm awake
    and there's sumthin i wanna see

    it's wet
    and i'm fiendin for it
    bring it closer
    so i can see just how it feels
    or maybe i'll taste you
    savor you with my tongue
    make you sing
    to the rhythm of my hands
    make you tremble
    at the sight of my.....
    bring it closer
    there's something i wanna see
    and once i've seen it all
    then i'll cover you
    in a warm embrace
    of lust and
    love and
    passion and....

    bring it closer
    i want sumthin from you

    i've been patiently waitin
    for such a while but
    now i'm thinkin
    there's no time like the current
    to infuse into your current
    and currently wade in the waters of
    your intelligence
    your beauty
    your grace
    your neck
    your lips
    your breasts
    your....

    baby
    bring it closer
    there's sumthin i wanna know

    i wanna learn
    this procedure
    show me some
    amatory exercises
    then we'll continue with
    some deep sea pleasure diving
    like
    i'm really going down.....
    bring it closer
    and i'll bury it deep
    in the crevices of my mouth
    so i can't forget it
    then i can teach you
    to speak
    sumthin like
    hallelujah in the language of
    passion
    or
    Thank You, Jesus
    in the language of
    sexual gratification
    or....

    bring it closer
    i wanna.....

    turn the pages of
    your desire
    and [see taste touch] feel you
    soothe me
    and make it better.....

    baby
    i'm awake
    i wanna....

    i assumed i'd just receive you
    but that ain't enough tonight
    you know i love you
    bring it closer
    and you can feel
    just how much....

    baby
    i'm awake
    as you wish!
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    M.


    dis was... well... ummm... let's just say that
    i'm trying to get closer to my screen... & i am
    completely awake as well!! :lol:

    Your talent keeps on amazing Me!!

    AlwaysLove.
    E~
     
  3. KentuckianKween

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    DIZZAM!!! now see... got me thinkin unholy thoughts on the holy day... lol... this was HOTT... mos def...

    critically speakin... this had me open from the first few lines... talkin bout lemme put my tongue here and... chile... watch ya'self... ;)

    i've been patiently waitin
    for such a while but
    now i'm thinkin
    there's no time like the current
    to infuse into your current
    and currently wade in the waters of
    your intelligence
    your beauty
    your grace
    your neck
    your lips
    your breasts
    your....


    you did a REMARKABLE job mirroring "Babe..." all the word play, everything... you did it perfectly and still retained the sensuality that made this what it was... *whew!*


    *wipes brow, stands, and calmly exits the room in search of a cold shower*






    :D
     
  4. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    E. (wow, can your tongue really taste a smile...cause baby, I'm smiling)

    Thank you for the love...and bring it closer....step through the computer screen and find yourself in Hamlet...lol

    Anyway, again, thank you for the praise....it means so much to me.

    M.
     
  5. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kween,

    :D Girl, save some of that cold shower for me, cause when I read "Babe", it was either that or write something to cool the heat that you ispired.....mmm (I need to say a few hail mary's before I get myself in trouble...lol)

    And just know that there was no way I could have mirrored your poem and not retained the sensuality.....cause it was seepin from the page!! Thanks for the praise....I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.

    by the way....now that I know you're a Queen of Passion, I need you to send me some step by step on those wanton acrobatics ;)

    Much Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FLOW HEAD

    RED~HOT ~~
    TASTE AND FEAST ON YA TREAT
    U GO MY BRUTHA DO YO THANG!!!:toast:
     
  7. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast:

    $$RICH$$.....thanks, man, I appreciate it...especially coming from a poet with so much skill....keep on doing what you do...and once again, thanks....tha feelin is mutual
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YESSSSS!!!!

    LIKEWISE MY BRUTHA LIKEWISE
    YO SKILLS BE BANG'IN:toast:
     
  9. YeshuJah

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    this is like

    this is like.. yo, y'all gonna start a stampede someplace.
    this is feel good, good. Gots me looking at my woman kinda, kinda, in that kinda ways now.

    YEOW!

    JAH Love.
     
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    Ummmm

    That was a very delightful read. I was all wrapped up in it.
     
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