Black Poetry : Babe...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by KentuckianKween, Jul 1, 2001.

  1. KentuckianKween

    KentuckianKween Active Member MEMBER

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    babe...
    you ‘wake?
    i wanna show you sumthin...

    it's hot
    and i'm feelin untitled
    come here
    and i’ll show you how it feels
    or maybe i’ll tell you
    undress you with my words
    make you dance
    to the pitch of my voice
    make you squirm
    at the sound of my...
    come here
    i wanna show you sumthin
    and once you’ve seen it all
    i’ll let you dress me
    in a silken gown
    of lace and
    love and
    sweat and...

    come here
    i wanna give you sumthin...

    i’ve been savin it
    for quite some time but
    now i’m thinkin
    there’s no time like the present
    to give you this present
    so to you i present
    my mind
    my soul
    my spirit
    my back
    my legs
    my thighs
    my...

    babe...
    come here
    i wanna teach you sumthin...

    lemme show you
    this routine
    teach you some
    wanton acrobatics
    then we’ll move on
    to some reckless mathematics
    like
    60 + 9 equals...
    come here
    and i’ll scratch it deep
    in the black board of your back
    so you don’t forget it
    then you can teach me
    to sing
    sumthin like
    your name in the key of
    pleasure
    or
    “Oh, My God”
    in the key of
    sin
    or....

    come here
    i wanna...

    this book was written
    just for you
    open me
    and indulge your senses
    you look tense
    lemme make it better....

    babe...
    wake up
    i wanna...

    i thought about just making love to you
    but that ain’t on tonight’s agenda
    yeah, i love you
    come here
    and i’ll show you
    just how much....

    babe....
    you ‘wake?
    i wanna fk...






    i blushed when i re-read this... LOL... peace
     
  2. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kween.....

    my my my...this one got to me....got to me good....it's amazing, and you should know that you are BAAAAAAAD, and that's as good as it gets :)....read "Baby: A Reply"....I think you'll like it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BABY BABY BABY!!!

    LOOK AT U
    TAKING ME FROM FLIGHT
    CUMMING DOWN TO FEEL
    DES NIGHT SLOW FLOW ME
    IN YO WORDS
    TAKE ME IN ECSTACY
    CARESS ME IN YO GLOW
    COZ U GOT ME STANDING UP
    IN ATTENTION!!!! LISTENING INTENTLY...
    WOOOOOOWEEEEEE!!!!!! :eek:
     
  4. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is on..

    every line is swinging!
    I think you capture that earl morning between the sheets let's do this again mood very well- as for being countrified- **** won't want it any other way!

    Loved this.

    YeshuJah*)
     
  5. KentuckianKween

    KentuckianKween Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks for readin' and respondin yall.. i 'preciate it :)
     
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    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY MY MY MYMA MY MY

    WHOO, is all I can say.
    ****, if i ever find a queen with words as soothing and tru
    as your have been to my ears.
    I would stay awake long after you've fallen asleep
    just to bask in the measure of your mind.
    You have impacted my thoughts
    And my sences all at once.
    You'd never have to wonder if I were awake.
    I'd never sleep,
    My KentuckianKween
     
  7. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS KINDA GOT THAT LOUISIANA "MOJO" FEEL TO IT..WHERE U FROM AGAIN:D ..MOOD SETTING PEICE RIGHT HERE KWEEN..
    GIMME SUM MO !!!

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man I wanna
    All that acrobats and thangs
    Dang Much Love
    I wanna wake up like that
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very erotic and passionate at the same time!
    Nice!
     
  10. nevar

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    this was hot flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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