Black Poetry : AXIS OF LOVE

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AXIS OF LOVE

    Love has over taken me, blinded my sight
    Bound my arms, yet given me flight
    My heart now soars where eagles roam
    Flesh a room with a view, but no not home
    Why do you tease me with your dance?
    I in vain court with words of romance
    Hoping you’ll stop and give me one glance
    Tho I know what you do has nothing to do with my pants
    I can’t take my eyes off you
    If ever I did my life would be through
    Tho you’re never here, you’ve always been true
    In heaven and earth I only see you
    Dance the dance you do so well
    Share with me your secret I shall not tell
    The ups and the downs I welcome them all
    I‘ll follow anywhere even if it means I must crawl
    Of course you know how caught I am
    If you are the Shepard then I am the lamb
    Lead to your pastures lush and green
    If my life is in sleep then it is you that I dream
    This poem is for the SUPREME​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was one awesome piece , tyte flow poet
     
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    i love how your words flowed poet do flo on.
     
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    thankx
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    most welcome it was off da hook
     
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    Beautiful write
     
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    You dropped that piece like it was hot....please flow on, please flow on.....:blowkiss:
     
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