Black Poetry : Awakening

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awakened by thoughts
    that flow so deep
    Aroused in my bed
    from a peaceful night's sleep
    Bewildered by your first
    visit, and bewitched by your last
    Betwixt and between your realm of love
    I fall under the spell you've cast
    Caressed by your hands that seem
    to know all those special places
    Cajoled is the look I imagine
    we have on our faces
    Delectable as I nibble and nuzzle
    that which I'm willing to please
    Delightfully we playfully pillow talk
    as we tempt each other and tease
    Ecstatically I sigh as every inch of
    our souls have entwined
    Enraptured I am in knowing that
    you've just made love to my mind....
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow very stimulating. makes me wonder. I like this poem good job poet. :blowkiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da cascading bliss
    mental kiss of love
    swims freely on a
    captive rapture that
    emotions flow in warmth
    to awaken da sleeping
    beauty to mindful love

    this took me on a ride in da mind
    whoaaaa !!! tyte drop watz ..........
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm Awakened almost every night, but thats only to pee lmbo.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know that you found this piece stimulating Defiantson. Appreciated.

    The sleeping beauty awakens
    to the warm rain of love
    Showering down upon
    her from the heavens above
    Savoring that sultry mental kiss
    never knew a love as
    sweet and unique as this
    Hope you enjoyed that mental ride Rich. Thank you for the sweet flow in response.

    LOL Godssoulja, well, we all awake for that reason sometimes. I like my way of awakening better though...You're something else, thanks brotha.
     
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    someone stole the word that i was gonna say. stimulating and nice style
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always nice to hear it twice Froggy1. Thank you so much for saying so.
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very stimulating, almost erotic with a pinch of that touched the essence of my soul
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw, this was beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Madd props sister watz. Madd props.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So nice to know that these words touched your essence so. Thank you so much nabraska.
    Thank you for such a sweet compliment krazelyricks, I appreciate that.
     
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