Black Poetry : AWAITING U.

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Holding a mold
    an image in eyes
    memories of love
    to my suprise

    A touch by tyme
    from dis fantasy
    of mines
    guiding way to
    sunny delight
    of a bliss
    sweet and right
    by night we be

    In da garden of
    romantic treasure
    is my deepest
    heart of pleasure
    where our souls lay
    like a prisoner in a
    distant beat

    Glorious divine love
    we take into a place
    as we kiss mental
    visions releasing a
    body of promises
    for my love of u
    been a love so true
    greatfully in my
    melatonin dreamz

    Embracing our passion
    brushing a air base and
    hug our souls in a radiant
    beauty sweeping intents
    of love at the alter i stand
    as u dance down the lane
    restoring my temple of life
    together we become one
    my beloveth .
    :heart: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :luvu: :spinstar: :heart: :spinstar: :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv:

    my love i come to thee open heart
    touch by faith reality of a fantasy
    within a dream our souls have became
    one in this passionate sweet garden
    for i am your treasure you no longer
    have to wait....my pleasure is yours
    this was sweet and romantic
    loving this vibe baby.....

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    then cometh
    walk to the alter
    of my heart and feel
    the romantic vibe
    as we cascade into
    the garden of vision
    lay at the temple of
    my soul and kiss the
    glory of love in the spools
    of hearts i'm awaiting !!!!

    Thankz Angel.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sweeter than sweet Rich. Waiting at the alter, for your love. Have to say this again, she sounds like a lucky woman to have such a romantic man.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz watz whom every she be , I guess another mystery maybe
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooh, baby.
    This is so fly.
     
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    sweet rich...
    i can hear children/adolescent
    on the street..saying and dancing
    to the rhythm of this...
    they be jumping to
    awaiting u...
     
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    Leave it to Rich to break it down how noone can be sweeter than a poet.
     
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    MR $$R$$,
    The sweetest words seem to whisper from your lips to my heart.
    The yearning never seems to end. And yet the anticipation can be so much
    Until that day when we are at last one. Hearts linked and dreams intertwined.
    From your beloveth to mine.
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich i'm teary up over this poem i told you that i'm coming home
    why are you trippin
    str8 I love your flow of things
     
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