Black Poetry : Average N....

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  1. PoeticThoughts

    PoeticThoughts Member MEMBER

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    I once met this boy and
    I thought he'd be nothing
    more than a toy, then one
    day I looked into his eyes,
    and he looked into mines,
    and after that it was just
    a matter of time...A matter
    of time until we both fell
    in love, and then I made
    the mistake of giving him
    all of my heart, and thinking
    that he'd always be mine

    If I only knew then what
    I know now that he's just
    an average N...., an average
    N.... who only thinks with
    his dik...An average N....
    who only thought of himself,
    thought he loved me, but
    really only loved himself

    I loved him more than
    words can say, I gave
    him my all, and with
    the love I thought I
    had of his I felt 10 feet
    tall...Everything else in
    the world seemed so
    small

    His love gave me a natural
    high, but then one day he
    dropped me from the sky,
    broke my heart and left me
    to die...If I only knew then
    what I know now that he's
    just an average N...., an
    average N.... who only
    thinks with his dik maybe
    I wouldn't of been such an
    average chick...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin ya here speak on
    nice scribe
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ouch that stinks for real...
    I'm sorry for ya pain
    flow on
    and let the pen heal u
    but ummm...he wasnt a N...he was an idiot lol :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice...
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GIRL, THAT SUCKS. I KNOW THIS FEELING ALL TO WELL. LOVED YOUR POEM. MUCH RESPECT
     
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    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't fool yourself
    you are no average chick
    him - an average N. -mos def
    but with a flow like yours?
    you are anything but average lol
     
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    nice

    i like this it was really hot. i totally know how u feel. i agreee to the fullest!!!!:)
     
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    ShayShay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heart felt words I know all too well

    Good Write

    Shay
     
  9. PoeticThoughts

    PoeticThoughts Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone for the love
     
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