Black Haiku : Autumn

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dojo54, Oct 26, 2002.

  1. dojo54

    dojo54 Member MEMBER

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    Yellow Leaves
    Floating upon the wind
    Autumn is beginning
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time does not slow, each new season begins, what will they bring? I like this, you are trying something so new to you in the Autumn of your life, what a beautiful beginning.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    holloween setup
    autumn flava of candy
    da leaves turn colors
     
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    Thank you gaylee.

    And thank you Rich this is new to me. This is my first time, Trying
    haiku.:thanks:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u did great most def u got it down pac.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    liked the flow of this Haiku
     
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