Black Poetry : Autumn Breeze.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 1, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As you pull me to the window
    and illustrate youre the darkyellow orange brown green
    candy floss......
    you know youre my modorator to go outside...
    to moisturize the origin..
    As the streets enter i admire youre organ that speaks to me..
    trough the sounds of dancng leaves and tapping chestnuts...


    i stand ...
    putting my hands in my black coat...
    drawing a tear in to my scarf...

    step...



    i stand ....
    and jog melancholy...
    work out mentaly petwords ..

    ....


    step.....


    i stand....
    hair is streaming ..
    like a weeping willow...
    i,m wrapped up...
    by youre soft visit...



    youre one of natures womanizer....


    i stand ...


    in you....




    still.......
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    very well done....likes ya style ...like a poetic tell keep on flowing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen is hot loving ya vibe
     
  4. PositiveMindset

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    I like the way U laid this.

    Do your thing.
     
  5. watzinaname

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    The imagery in this is crisp like an autumn day. I enjoyed this flow.
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks..:heart:






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    This is very nice, and original!
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: thanks





    going almost to winter now...






    loveyouall.....
     
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    oh sister :)
    this is so nice..
    i could feel the breeze of the autumn
    with a romantic flair
    wonderful poet

    Blue:heart:
     
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    Letr the leaves od Fall's emotions rain down on us. I am feeling your vibe in here sis! :chef:
     
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