Black Poetry : autobiography pt. 1

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The circumference of my consciousness
    can’t be consciously conceived
    believe indeed my pen bleeds with every rhyme I breed,
    as my mind proceeds to interweave
    the complexities of the life I lead,
    the fallacies of my reality, become increasingly apparent.
    Incoherent speech patterns mesh raw talent
    with uniquely complete soliloquies.
    Cause I mainly think in threes
    mind, soul, and body.
    You have no idea what I embody.
    The lyrical strength of me, is only about a tenth of me,
    burning my thoughts onto the paper at the tenth degree.
    I stand three inches above six feet, yet still speak
    with a technique of speech that peaks beyond meek variations
    weak illustrations of false strife
    my pass life is flooded with visions of clutched mics
    so I clutch tight, with the full extent of my might
    and recite what I consider extensions of sight
    this eclectic dialect, or better yet, the level that I set it at
    is rivaled only by my own aesthetic rhetoric.
    To irrelevant rhymes, I’m celibate
    they don’t relate, so with only like-minds does mine commensurate.
    I speak with wood and lead, with wit as sharp as a knife’s edge.
    I pledge to be true to my thoughts and write what I feel,
    and whenever I feel to write, my heart spills and stains
    the grains and fibers that make up the sheets of paper my mind devours
    Hours and hours of repetitive word rearranging
    Helps keep my mind maintaining and my soul from ever changing.


    Copyright 2004
    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed love the drop of this dip
    like cool water .......tyte
     
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    So you put your all into your pieces, so that they will each leave an imprint, as this one does. Speak on, we're listening.
     
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    Wiping my car motor it has a trifling bazaar odor my garage

    Stinks write a series of lines and verses to meet quotas large

    In hell collisions like televisions with channels I can’t handle

    Flow **** incredible with programs scheduled like Mickey mantle

    Up to bat
     
  5. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I came to bring the masses another minute of heat,
    with metaphors and similes that you have to repeat,
    at least three times
    to identify the stimuli within my rhymes.
    I write lines
    to provoke ya left and right minds to combine,
    and come find
    what’s buried in the confines of my shrine,
    cause my mind
    computes on just a level shy of Eienstein’s.
    I’m never shy to speak mine,
    forever lifting weak minds with clever rhymes and punchlines.
    Cause even for the blind,
    I try to spit it in brail
    .. . :.: ...: :.. . :: :.:. ....: :.. . . . : ...::: . . :..
    But I be burning fingertips all the way up to the nail,
    and I flow with so much funk, they try and decipher the smell.
    Who knew I could roast a cuticle
    with what I wrote in my cubicle,
    irrefutably beautiful,
    more complex then a rubix cube,
    get respect from the rudest dude,
    lyrically dropping the truest jewels.
    Never following Jewish rules,
    uncovering history’s newest clues.
    Seriously,
    my lyrics be, causing conspiracies
    and causing MC’s to plead,
    “Lyr1c’s the illest breed”
    flow at a blinding speed, combined with an underlining need
    to create the most satisfying reads.
    And as I said before,
    this was just a minute more
    of poetic metaphors.

    anytime poet
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh **** now

    Look I start battles and mark cattle like a banding iron

    Somehow annoy like a cowboy’s six shooter roar like a lion

    Paw cats and like the law bats crime and grime with jail

    Cells and prevail well within my limits hey no time for bale

    Brave *** nerds get locked in a cage for birds got brave words

    To say, Twist attitude put in dish for food they get ate raw by herds

    These cats’ sad schemes are like bad dreams can’t awake proud

    Spit a fake crowd of rhymes just a snake loud no spines, plowed

    Fields of wackiness

     
  7. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice poet very nice,

    Freestyle or free verse as my words flow freely,
    I thirst to disburse absurd verbs as freebies
    lyrically spit rhymes with punch lines that’s lethal
    like I literally punch the lines with my pencil
    lead missiles, destroy the paper’s interweaving
    and have your mind believing that you seeing what you reading
    poetically deceiving cause the flow is so abstract
    I can spit it so relaxed or relentless on attack
    flip the paper on it’s back and **** it up with my mental
    experimental posts to earn diversified credentials
    detrimental wordplay deteriorate the youth
    as the devils follow suit, but in my work you hear the truth
    and if you want the proof, just read a couple posts
    then holla at cha boy about the ones you liked the most
    cause when I read your words, they inspire me to write
    and explore my inner beacon so I can shine my light
    and penetrate the great abyss, I know I’m just a novice
    but getting better is my wish
     
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    imprint

    You have left an imprint on my soul. Very good flow.
     
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    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: POET....welcome, welcome, welcome...

    You sooo rocked this...:bullseye:

    I can't begin, to begin to tell you how "refreshing" your flow is...

    Your mind and your pen combined...is like fire

    Please continue to grace us with, what a true flow, is really all about...

    Consider me...an "Official Fan...Officially Impressed...
    and Officially looking forward to more of your work"

    Set this house on fire and burn it down...

    You've already lit the match...

    and started a Metaphorical Poetic Holocaust...
    there's only one thing left for a reader to do...

    :bowdown:
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yo dun...welcome to the board...
    i like the way you stepped through da door...
    please flow on....
    one love
    khasm
     
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