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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Broham, Mar 8, 2015.

  1. Eno Otu

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    Peace

    I'm sure that if u check the archives you will find what u seek, so seek abd ye shall find. 'Lol'.
     
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    lol Broham .... you don't really get off that easy around these poetry forums ... :nails:

    I mean ... well ... you're encouraged to write your own poetry ... :krazee:

    I wrote my first poem with the poets here, and it's all about speaking what's in your heart.

    Just let the words flow ... though like Brother info-moetry said ... it's probably some here already.

    But that's not as fun as your own poetry ... :look:

    If you write the first few lines .... make it an "addon poem" ... and get others to add on with you.

    But I don't remember folk putt'n in poetry requests ... :lol: ... but hey ... it's never too late for new stuff ... :wink:

    Might be like wait'n for a bus though ... that's already a month late ... :bus:

    Personally ... i'm looking forward to YOUR POETRY .... :research: ... :love:

    Much Much Love and Peace.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Okay ... take your time ... and come up with 10 short lines ... just like that

    from the heart ... :love:

    that's a beautiful start ... :mirror:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    great start brother.....and if you need a lift I be more then happy to give that boost....
    creativity and heart felt with a dose of realism will bring out that perfect piece of art
    that you seek...

    And yes I could bring that poetry you seek, but would love to see you create it
     
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    It's called wordplay...

    She is SO BEAUTIFUL <--- play off of the opening entry, as it will guide the rest
    Some say she is the Most High (consider what "High" is in relation to Beautiful, something unreachable, unattainable)
    Shouldn't I realize (brings forth the idea of consciousness or awareness of this Exalted Creature of Beauty)
    Or do I already realize (in the ode of Common Sense aka "Common", it don't take a whole day to recognize sunshine)

    • from here, play off of the vibe that is created...

    Or do I already realize,
    Within her eyes I see the Sun shine,
    The gaze that brings me enlightened joy and fills my mind,
    Will the pleasantries of life in a land of her creation,
    A Queen she is to me, and a mother to my nation....

    Something like this, and just carry on within the element of the initial form
     
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    Broham ... okay ... i'm waiting for some more lines ... :pc:

    Thanks MY $$RICH$$NESSSSS ... $$RICH$$ ... and ... UBNaturally ... :toast:

    This thread reminds me of the old old days of destee ... :hearts1:

    Okay Broham .... where's dat poetry Bruh Man ... :wink:

    Loving Us!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Me too, the only way is to spin off what you feel so brother let me see you drop some verses
     
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