Quiet Poetry Lounge : ATTRACTIVE EYEZ

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Bubbling cascading dreamin eyez

    calls my love onward unto her morning shine
    my heart is flush upon da moment of us
    as i look her in da eyez , I see in depth
    a morning glory to praise and a blissful treat
    yet lovely moment of connection

    She attracts me with da notion of a blink
    the way she look in her eyez just speak
    dat make me become submissional weak
    I caress her intently as i read her eyez
    to look upon her i get mesmerize
    wit a hypnotic glist of rapidfire
    she become my greatest of desires

    Beyond words i hear her inside my slumber
    da whispers of yes ' babe yes "
    asking me to behold and comfort
    to love and adore wit compassion
    to treasure and respect wit cares
    all i can do is smile when i look into them eyez

    Something about them eyez wooooo!!!
    :eeek:


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    EYEZ II


    When i visit da morning light
    inside her eyez i see a new sight
    a love of warmth that's so bright
    a heart of cares a feelin so right

    Something deep about her eyez
    like an angel deep above da skies
    she like an ripple of gold
    soft beauty to be sought and behold

    Beyond words her eyez speak
    tell me something unique and sweet
    with a gentle vibrant tone
    her eyez like a sunday morning song

    Attractive cascading center glo
    eyez of beauty like never before
    I hope she look my way again
    and i pray not to sin ......gosh !

    something about dem eyez
    :donttell:
     
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    still all i can vision is dem Eyez ........whewwwwww as i look back !
     
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    very well writtten i enjoyed this piece when i read it easy and smooth
     
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    thank you my dearest
     
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    love dem eyez !!!!
     
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