Black Poetry : Attracted to His Skin

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  1. MsInterpret

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    Everything about him
    From deep within
    To his dark rich skin

    Our souls have pasts
    A love that will forever last
    In a universe so vast

    He's black butter
    Smooth voice utters
    Making my body shudder

    Hands so strong
    Mmm hmm...and long
    Black love...There is no wrong

    My Afro King
    I am his Afro Queen
    Together our hearts will sing

    This is no sin
    Attached
    Attracted to his skin
     
  2. TXDiamond

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    This is on point!!!! Love it...

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  3. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Peace and Love!




    .....Tried, but couldn't pass this up, lol...While I know, sister TXDiamond, you probably searched in vain for a black audience, and I also recognize the innovative value of adding an applause, definitely outside the box action; and again, a first, I strongly believed. Nevertheless, it must of been hard to use this all white audience, over and all black audience. And for making the decision to post, in spite of the above, I give you much respect for its use...Peace In my sister friend, for real-straight talk.


     
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    WOW I HAVE NOTHING AGAINST WHITE FOLKS EXCEPT FOR SOME OF THE ACTIONS THEY DO BUT THIS WHITE AUDIENCE IS WAY OUT OF PLACE AND DON'T BELONG HERE AT ALL IT SCREWED UP THE WHOLE POST HA! HA! HA! WOW! TX DIAMOND SHOULD APOLOGIZE FOR THAT ONE (AND WOW ONLY A WHITE BOY COULD AMEN A TRICK LIKE THIS)
     
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    LOL...If you find a Black audience, I will make sure to post it. I was just so caught up with the poem, that I didn't see a "White" audience. I saw an audience clapping.

    However, you can look at it another way. The white audience could represent that White America agrees that Black is Beautiful...
     
  6. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    .......I know, I know, lol, and guess what, I'm going to look at it that way, White America agrees that Black is Beautiful, for real-straight talk, TXDiamond.:) Also, look at it in this manner, no one can now approach you, or ridicule you about the pic, its on the table and has been dealt with...Peace In,

     
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    When I chose the audience, I was just so caught up with the poem, that I didn't see a "White" audience. I saw an audience clapping. Big Oops!!LOL...Much apologies to the OP:flowers:. I think I'll just back away slowly...:11900:

    I'll just stick to the smilies :terrific:
     
  8. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    .......No, no, you are fine, its all good, there are no problems, okay, please don't feel that way, better a friend than foe, right?

     
  9. MsInterpret

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    THANKS FOR TAKING AWAY FROM MY POEM AND ITS PURPOSE

    THIS IS NOT ABOUT A ANIMATED GIF
     
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    ......See what you've done now rhymebad, created a problem were there wasn't one...the apology was rejected...smh.

     
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