Black Poetry : ATTENTION

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcutie, Aug 14, 2005.

  1. lilcutie

    lilcutie Active Member MEMBER

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    Attention all b*tches, h*es, and chickenheads
    This is a special announcement
    I dont care about you
    Or how you feel about me
    So stop stepping in my face
    Trying to start some
    Because you can't handle me
    So don't mess with me

    Attention all n*ggas who think the got game
    What everyone of you needs to know
    I don't want you
    So stopping grabbing on my arm
    When I'm walking down the street
    Trying to catch my interest
    Because you can't handle me
    So don't mess with me

    Attention all ex-boyfriends
    Paging all ex-lovers
    Stop calling me
    You had it, you lost it :getout:
    So stop stopping by just to say hi
    Becasue you can't handle me
    So don't mess with me

    Attention all the people of the world
    Shut up and listen
    Stop trying to ***** me over
    I got what it takes
    I don't need to prove it
    Don't try to break me down
    So you can build yourself up
    Because you can't handle me
    So stop f*cking with me :censored:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep drop yet well heard
    word now we know !!!!!!!!!
     
  3. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you got gotta let the world know how it is you feel even though they don't always want to listen I think you made your feelings very clear here.
     
  4. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl, you tell them. Excellent Write.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess you told them....str8 to the point...diggin it
     
  6. sonnee01

    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okayyyyyyyyy....say no mo!!!!
     
  7. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! someone sounds a bit angry...lol....but i like the emotions in the poem...and WE ALL felt your anger....good drop
     
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