Black Poetry : Attempt

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Nov 19, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The temptation is never over.
    Wanting to correct the wrong spells over & over.
    Introduction to the peoples correct destiny.
    Needing to come in my own so the proof stands with me.
    I the one that knew the right thing to tell you.
    No time for timidness on your line.​
     
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    Claiming It!:)
     
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    I enjoyed the whole; but these highlighted lines had me saying, "SHO' NUFF!"
     
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    Your colors make it have a different feel. Thx
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt every line ......yes claim it !
     
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