Khasm13 : attak mode...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    im tired of always bein on da defense
    watchin pollutions of executions
    and friends talked of in past tense
    lies foggin up my eye lense
    while confusin my ears
    with my balance messed up
    like trying to teeter on a tear
    why do you play that way
    with my fear?
    and it seems like it's only
    in dis hemisphere
    i see you trying to freeze me in da light
    like a deer
    caught by a car in da night
    all of your f#cked up ways
    have granted me new insight
    cause i'm tired of losing da fight
    in da game you set up
    so i'm gonna change da frame
    so you can start to feel some pain
    dis aint 1860
    and my mentality is not da same
    to play me like a pawn in da game
    has brought curses on your name
    and many more to come
    cause i aint dreamin of no
    [email protected] dancin suga plums
    while my people reside in da slums
    in da hellholes
    that you control
    you can call me a monsta slayer
    and i'll call you a troll
    your forcefully removed head
    i wish to bowl
    as i chill on da grassy knoll
    the temperment changes in my soul
    to the point where
    i dream of dicin devils
    in attak mode
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    d*mn...tyte poem!
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you put it all together, Khasm13. "Trying to teeter on a tear" is one amazing line. Great flow.
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum khas...
    drop da knowledge on us!!!
    scrybe on, scrybe on!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks lovely

    gempis-- thanks for da love...i like that line too :)

    play-- oh i shall my dear, i shall...until no words are left in my head
    peace
    khasm
     
  6. Locust

    Locust Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh heellllllll yeah, let that be a warning shot
    i give ya a 21 gun salute, madd scribe, krazy vision
    eloquently said in a smooth flo
    attak mode
    Invasion
    one.
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word locust...
    and you don't havta worry
    bout me talkin bout da way you write...
    skip punctuation...lol...btw dat dude was a lil off...
    on top of my ish list is freakin hypocrates...
    peace
    khasm
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!

    cause i aint dreamin of no
    [email protected] dancin suga plums
    while my people reside in da slums

    Khas...you leave me speechless,
    your reign on the page is "Fierce"!
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get em good
    don’t stop
    its understood
    too many deceptions
    slash the misconceptions
    that have our people in a rut
    destroy the misconstruction
    that spawns in their gut
    don’t delay
    right away
    no time to let them display
    it’s a trick -a trifling tryst - a trap
    you gotz the wrong cat
    seek and employ
    no time to enjoy
    I speak in mental code
    Its all the "Attak mode"
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Khasm13
    feelin you on this
    Warrior

    "playing with our fears"

    Your observation is sharp!!!!!!!
    now that we know
    it ain't gonna work anymore
    wonderful scribe poet
    Peace
     
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