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  1. unique1

    unique1 Member MEMBER

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    This is to my ex-boyfriend. He inspire too much of my poetry and drives my crazy!!!!

    Your touches
    Your kisses
    even your sweet words.
    They still send me to that place.
    Although my title you took away
    we seem to still move at the same pace.

    No matter how long you've been gone,
    how long we've been apart.
    we start back from where we left off.
    Sometimes we backtrack to conflict and childish games
    You call me names and I do the same.
    This crazy thing leads to the next
    then to conflict
    and me yelling and screaming about how you make me SICK.

    Yet it's...
    Your touches
    Your kisses
    Your sweet words
    they always bring me back to you.
    Sometimes I feel they aren't mine alone.
    I believe that at any given time there are at least 2 or 3 queens who think they sit next to your throne.

    No matter if that's the case
    I believe that my position will never be replaced.
    Although I refuse to kiss your lips and rub your face.
    When you try to again take it to that place.
    In my mind you still mine...and it seem in your mind I'm still your's.

    I'm more than a lover to you, I'm a real friend.
    I'm that rare type that comes along and makes your head spin because I inspire you deep within.
    Not just my physical, it's the mental too.
    I surprise you when I say the things that I do.
    And no matter if we are connected in a title or not.

    I'll always know the feel of
    your touches
    your kisses
    and those sweet words that you use to say
    because they are engraved on my heart
    and I read that ish each and everyday.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhh! yes the reflection
    can be deep , sweet and painful
    yet we still see within da beauty
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Memories of sweet moments remain, even at the worse times. Keep working that pen.
     
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    awww yes the Memories
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can dig this piece. Taking me way back.
     
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