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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My instated ideologies
    slowly melt away like candle wax.
    The dribble travels down
    my chest and thighs and creates a
    puddle of misconceptions and
    murky perceptions.
    With the chill of Winter she flowed in.
    Warm and beguiling,
    in her hand she held the spice of life.
    Violins in the background and I’m suddenly misty.
    Never quite awake, I move around in some sort of haze;
    trying with every thing in me to discern this creatures ways.
    She glides deeply in my pool of feelings and I immediately began
    to slip away.
    See, I said I would never fall in love again.
    I would never be a slave or fall upon my knees to the likes of Love;
    Now slowly and surely, with just the entrance of this Lovechild, I'm faltering.
    Stuttering like a grade school chap and feeling the warmth of her essence
    pressed against my heart.
    ****! It seems like my Never became a stated fact.
    Love slipped from my lips,
    dribbled into my lap;
    and I was caught.

    ~Copyright
    The Year of the Monkey(2004).
    The 93rd year, the 4th month, 29th day
    "Lady Yang's Gate" Publishing
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wooo....my,my,my. This is luciously beautiful. Your lines really take my soul places.
    ~j

    Check you email...waiting for your response. :sand:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da power of love !
    dis was whoa deep and strong vibing
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My queen of the night! THANK YOU I'm finally speechless! Love to you and I'm going to check my email right now!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha Rich, What can I say accept you are truly beautiful!!!! Thank you so much for the love.
     
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    Like it or not, sometimes we become drunk with it....this was intriguing.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Watz. God bless
     
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    very beautiful poem
    keep the flow coming :)
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Well! This is truly lovely. Thanks for letting us go along for the ride.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater and Gempis, you are both so beautiful. Thank you!
     
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