Black Poetry : ATLANTIS

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Isles be missing you...

    Coney Island atmosphere

    No man is an island there

    At peace point of view

    Images of people who

    Look alot like

    Me and you

    Afro-blue

    The pool ~

    Men and women

    Looking good

    Children with

    Good attitudes

    I'll be seeing you...


    Darryl Abdu Omari :picture:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2007
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about some kind of Eden, such serenity here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great creative piece where i was envision of this all
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for visiting ATLANTIS.
     
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    aww was there....



    blue waters with a golden glans...


    people swim...

    you press a flower like a putton ..

    and a a stone came up from out of the waters ...
    like those one they put on youre back ...in spa..

    people lay upon them..

    and they were spoiled with yellow kinda cream that they could take out of the flowers looked like violets...

    they relaxed no Tears just Peace....


    we Flew there ...


    unicorns..

    to other places Beautifull lands..




    God is always Good..


    and has always Good things in store for the people....


    he beholds things ..


    that we Imagine..




    Nice piece Poetsought

    how are you?






    Jezus loves You


    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Flower,

    I am blessed, thank you.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanna go......
    OOOOHH I'm gonna go....
    (In a tune)
    (Changes tune)
    HOOO
    Just wait till Sunday Morning
    I'm gonna Rise...........

    :SuN049:
    (Singing Out)
    ~PeaceandLove~
    :SuN049:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your song is most appreciated here.

    Thanks.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1poetsought
    Where did it go?
    That safe place, fun place,
    The place where families connected and the only worry was wiping off the ice cream that ran down our hands to our elbow.
    Walking down memory lane


    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No problem My poetic Brotha

    :10900: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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