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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by godsmantru, Apr 18, 2008.

  1. godsmantru

    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    Slippin' and Sliddin' in my Sunday shoes:
    after I heard the news;
    I was unaware, when I led that prayer
    They didnt even care;
    God please bless Those Atlanta children,
    My god said Peace be still then;
    Little did I know, it was what they were after,
    Opened my eyes to faces of laughter;
    But why, I said, I know Gods heart,
    Little did I know, it was only the start;
    They put me in a room,
    naked and cold, fresh from the womb;
    Tears streamin', Kids screamin'
    Would they hurt me too?
    Next week Im not stayin' with you.
    Rollin' through Atlanta, tire blows out,
    Here comes the demons, and all that banta'
    Aginst all odds, traffic flyin' by,
    I just kept walkin' on,
    Had no time to yawn,
    Finally , here comes the dawn!
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flowing!!
    Very Heart felt and well put
    Continue
    !!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as the day turns ...This was a great read and really like how u word this out
     
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    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    thank you. when i write, i am pouring out my life. some things we cant see, we just have to feel.
     
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    Continue to paint those pictures that permit us to feel your experiences.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's hard after a day like that the dawn must have been a hot tub with a martini and a two piece chicken dinner fried hotter than hell with tators and gravy! Way to flow & keep on walking it out & working it out!
     
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