Quiet Poetry Lounge : "At thy Altar"

[$$RICH$$]

Here i am
there u are
together from afar
as our love joins
our soul combined
yet two hearts

I kneel before thee
at the altar of
temptation
upon desires cast
as devotion calls me
beyond nudity

My deep inhibition
befound to a ransom love
on a randomly cry
as my heart vow unto u
behold my beloveth
that i am

I've kissed the lips of purity
and touched the fairest indiscretion
upon the noble truth of love
thy honesty sending da elegant beauty
at the altar i giveth thee thou token
of hope and future to behold

Whispering softly of da modesty spirit
a deep possession of my soul taken
by the delightful rapture of moans
in tongue i speaketh as love is dewelled
unconditionally as our blessing ride
we will feel the glory of this union
forth our love will never tarnish to rust

At thy altar i stand awaiting thee hand
will u come !? behold my love ............
:luvv: ​

 

[IfUComeSoftly]

awww... that's so sweet Rich...

that's going to be me soon... oooo i can't wait! in the meantime i'll just read about it... lol:boring:

 

[$$RICH$$]

If-u-come-softly
upon da altar of vowz
beside thy loveth
and feel da warmth
of thy heart
ya wait will be short
as u can envision
da beauty of thy love
unconditionally
feel me , know i am
take me , take me now !

Thank u for the visit within da altar of love as i wait.

 

[queentswana]

Gee whiz,
This piece makes me sangggggggg

3-steps, from the Alter..here's your chance, to change your mind,
Remember.. "Forever".. is a very long time!

2- steps, from the Alter...please don't hesitate
everyone's smiling, their happy for us I know...please don't make me wait.

1-step from the Alter...Now we shall make, our Vows...the father looked back and said to the son...
~ ~YOU TAKE OVER...NOW!~ ~

Wow that felt good singing that song..whoa, thanks for allowing me to step back into those old memories Rich

 

[$$RICH$$]

queent i can hear u sanggggging dat tune in smiles
as yesteryears of memories kiss the vision of sweet times

oh yes ! sang honey sang as i stand here upon da altar of love