Quiet Poetry Lounge : "At thy Altar"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Here i am
    there u are
    together from afar
    as our love joins
    our soul combined
    yet two hearts

    I kneel before thee
    at the altar of
    temptation
    upon desires cast
    as devotion calls me
    beyond nudity

    My deep inhibition
    befound to a ransom love
    on a randomly cry
    as my heart vow unto u
    behold my beloveth
    that i am

    I've kissed the lips of purity
    and touched the fairest indiscretion
    upon the noble truth of love
    thy honesty sending da elegant beauty
    at the altar i giveth thee thou token
    of hope and future to behold

    Whispering softly of da modesty spirit
    a deep possession of my soul taken
    by the delightful rapture of moans
    in tongue i speaketh as love is dewelled
    unconditionally as our blessing ride
    we will feel the glory of this union
    forth our love will never tarnish to rust

    At thy altar i stand awaiting thee hand
    will u come !? behold my love ............
    :flowers: :luvv: :love: :kiss2: :flowers:
     
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    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww... that's so sweet Rich...

    that's going to be me soon... oooo i can't wait! in the meantime i'll just read about it... lol:boring:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If-u-come-softly
    upon da altar of vowz
    beside thy loveth
    and feel da warmth
    of thy heart
    ya wait will be short
    as u can envision
    da beauty of thy love
    unconditionally
    feel me , know i am
    take me , take me now !

    Thank u for the visit within da altar of love as i wait.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee whiz,
    This piece makes me sangggggggg

    3-steps, from the Alter..here's your chance, to change your mind,
    Remember.. "Forever".. is a very long time!

    2- steps, from the Alter...please don't hesitate
    everyone's smiling, their happy for us I know...please don't make me wait.

    1-step from the Alter...Now we shall make, our Vows...the father looked back and said to the son...
    ~:spinstar: ~YOU TAKE OVER...NOW!~:spinstar: ~

    Wow that felt good singing that song..whoa, thanks for allowing me to step back into those old memories Rich
     
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    queent i can hear u sanggggging dat tune in smiles
    as yesteryears of memories kiss the vision of sweet times

    oh yes ! sang honey sang as i stand here upon da altar of love
     
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    For oneday her love will open unconditional and come forth to da alter of my awaiting
    arms and love to vow in security that i so will cherish her whole exsistance as my love
    there we shall rise into a new day and behold a love inside da realism of life we stand
    so at the alter i await her to say in sweet melodies YESSSSSS!!!
     
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    Rich, these are vows to live by!


    I hear the Temptations singing, "This Is My Promise."
     
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    yes indeed sistah cherryblossom thanks for the visit inside da vows and alter
     
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