Black Poetry : At The Club

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Aug 25, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At The Club

    Bad news when I had to choose and pick out a girl quick
    Got to be street smart to get a sweetheart in this world slick
    My thug’s blood surging modest want a virgin goddess with thick
    Eyebrows make a guy howl saying bow! Wow! Doing dog tricks
    Devastated galore like a domesticated carnivore the clock ticks
    Going for the bone in her coo-chee zone juicy tones like porn flicks
    Clout hurl in my brain wants a pearl of a dame just to lick

    Like puppy chow I’m not a yuppie now but uppity somehow
    Cum to stroke tongue and smoke some juicy coo-chee hairs plow

    Deep in her fields of gravy and reveal the crazy in a boo
    Pulverize her soil like supplies of oil gushing like a hot brew
    Clearing the way while hearing her say “oh god only a few like you”
    A thug ill but the club fill with chicks oh what to do?
    They got brown round butt so they all struts it true

    DJ’s music hot and snappy but I’m not happy wanna tongue
    Some chick “so boo you alone”? “yes I guess so” I’m sprung
    And hung on her she has a dimple this jazz is simple like drums
    “Well we can ride and glide in my Lex” “oh no guys tries for sex”
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hot drop on da spot
    at da club where bodies rub
    feeling da bliss girl hug
    fit deep like a glove
    smokin tunes jazz play
    as she sway ya way
    making da moment last
    before midnight pass
    so get ya groove on bruh
    down at da club 9
    wit dat divne sweet sunshine
    coz ya thug bones sprung on
    her tone of sexiness twist
    i be liking dis flow on MADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah RICH thanks for the poem and the props
     
  4. Nisa

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    Hmm..aint nothin but the truth spoken in that flow..lol guess thats why I gave it up. Hot ****..that was the truth..flow on !
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MADDRAPPER

    I've got to give it to you on this one. You had a very nice flow...smooth read.

    But bruh...you in the club looking for a "virgin goddess?" Come on. :lol:

    :thanks: for sharing the flow, bruh...dapz.

    :toast:
     
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    sweetbrownsugar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was some tight flow right there! I like that one A LOT MADDRAPPER!
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweetbrownsugar THANKS FOR THE PROPS AND RESPONSE FOR REAL GIRL
     
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    Tight flow... But I, too, gave it up.. too hot! Thanks for posting this.
     
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    toylin thanks for the props for real girl
     
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