Black Poetry : At the Bar

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At the Bar

    I bowl nightly and hold on tightly to HIP HOP in a world
    Of hurt see a girl’s skirt that clings to her body she swirls
    Booty swing and party, couldn’t tame my emotions this
    Dame put lotions on her legs I ain’t too proud to beg and kiss
    I think I love her in this club I prefer her, try and take her home
    Must boast my act try get close contact with her lips a wet strong
    Kiss exists, bet her thing crispy ready to fling a Frisbee to the tone
    Of love first sight and that’s the worse fright to experience I’m Gone
    With the Wind like Clark Gable now my heart able to talk with her
    “Look boo I’m on the street for survival and greet girls upon arrival
    Having a gun is tribal so I go in peace to feast don’t believe in suicidal”
    My shook luck brew time to look up to her body “so baby boo you have
    The deft best cream and your self-esteem is high let be be the guy grab
    Your waist on a hardcore pace for a strip in bed lips so red let me hold
    Your hand, I’m a man of many desires and you have plenty of fires bold
    Under your skirt I wonder can I work that for you boo got that true love girl”
    “OK I’m hot down there but not just any clown gonna tear this up my world
    Hurl more complex than that, so you can’t criticize my legit thighs because
    You wanna hit my pies and tries very hard to sweet talk me without flaws
    My breasts amaze and I express praise listen and heard twisting words
    Try get under my skirt and work so I’m alert that won’t happen even birds
    Know better a girl grow clever by the day, my coochee hair bazaar you
    can’t compare a car toa Mercedes ladies know this, you not a star true”
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UPPING FOR A RESPONSE
     
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    rhymebad, I love reading what you write,
    but you really put up one heck of a fight.
    by not spreading your love to other poets that do,
    stop by and give their love to you.

    In this life we live, some day you will learn...
    that one hand will wash, as the other hand burn.
    So here's a tip from me ...to you,
    start giving a little of you, to others too!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done bruh , I see ya pen still got that fire .