Black Poetry : At Spring time wit Dha Fam

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  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We had our herbal dreams…
    We cut our growing weeds…
    We lit the charcoal…
    We reminisce of stories once told…

    The sun is so brightly shining…
    My cousin…is so nicely rhyming…
    My brother…hittin wit da beats…
    As we walk together down the street…

    My mother seasons the food…
    And my daddy is trying to stay cool.
    The heating is steady rising…
    But we are still compromising…

    To spring time wit dha Fam….

    A picnic stacked with grub…
    As we wait…splittin a dub…
    Rhymin…Scribin…Flowin…lovin…
    The springtime wit dha Fam.

    And as we casually shoot some hoops…
    Back and forth….
    Left then right…
    A three…In the face…
    No empty space…but we just..
    Chillin..lovin…
    Spring time..wit dha Fam…

    The smoke from the grill…
    And you so hungry…
    If those looks could kill…
    Or feed you growling tummy…

    But we just slide in some spades…
    Maybe we could play for money…
    Just remember when the foods done…
    That will say whose won!!!

    All is fair in a Fam reunion…
    And with spring time air…
    You can have a great time…
    At springtime. Wit dha Fam!!!
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one...

    ...had me reminiscin'. Thinkin' about those good ol' times. *Thanx for takin' me back for a while* :D :D
     
  3. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah,
    these definetely were the "good ole dayz"....
    nice flow sis..

    8th!
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know right!!!

    I couldn't help but to think about it...so i figured I'd right about it. Since some of my peeps came to visit me this weekend. I'm glad you guys liked it ...I'm happy to be of service..bringing back those memories that is...
     
  5. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Know Im feelin' this

    Summer Breeze Makes me feel fiiinne....remember that cut...
    youve boosted my good mood today Sha'..we on the same page today..4 real !

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  6. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So you feelin it

    I'm glad you can relate...I've been feeling like this all weekend and it just so happens that it decided to role on over into today...which i ain't mad at.
     
  7. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaneak

    I'm loving this piece!!
    It is so real
    I could smell the grub on the grill

    tight piece poet!

    *BBQ-Poetry*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LOOKING AHEAD TO OUR FAMILY GET 2GETHER
    IN LATE JUNE.......THANKS FOR DA REMINDER
     
  9. Heartbeat

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    Thank you for sharing...I saw it all in your words.

    BE
     
  10. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HeartBeat and Hunter: I'm glad you guy liked this...I tried to be as visionary but not too elaborate as possible...

    $Rich: I hope you have a nice time at your Fam Reunion.
     
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