Black Poetry : At My Computer

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Jul 7, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was sitting at my computer...
    And I was thinking of something to write
    Something that was full of love
    Something that seemed right

    But as I sat at my comp.
    I got an unnerving chill
    My ***** *** past had come to haunt me
    Bringin old memories of thrill

    That naive lil girl I knew
    Who trusted too many folks
    Talked too much, and told everything
    Now "she" bears so many cruel jokes

    Got a few new friends
    Even rescued my smile
    I hadn't seen it in weeks
    It's been quite a while

    But ever so often
    I can picture his face
    The things we used to talk about
    What we did at his place

    And my chest starts fillin up
    Full oftears,pain,and hidden rage
    THIS HAPPENED OVER 5 MONTHS AGO!!!!
    WHY CAN'T I TURN THE PAGE?

    I can cry as much as I want to...
    But I will never again hear his voice
    Stopped supportin me a while ago
    I'm suffering still from that choice

    I sit at my computer now
    I can't handle the pain anymore
    I'm trying to writing a love poem....
    But I can't write any more


    :(
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SwtT.........
    girl I loved this! talkin bout a sista can relate!
    Truly nice flow, comin straight from da heart.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm so much feeling u here ....wow !
    surely the stroke returns once the mind
    begin to burn da pain become heal
    as new friendz will make u feel good
    this was a very well posed flow
     
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    The way to get over a man is to get new friends!

    Peace
     
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    girl....i have been through this sooooooooo many times....and sometimes when you can't write a love poem, you end up writing the best poems that come from the heart...like this one...just write down all the feelin's inside you and you'll be amazed at how the words just flow onto the paper....beautiful heartfelt flow girl...
     
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    SwtT...Sometimes the best words are the ones left unspoken..You know I am here for you always...:)
     
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    Play- Thank you so much :) I'm glad someone knows what im tryin to say

    $RICH$-Thank you so much:heart:

    emprezz- don't know about that one anymore...:( but thank you :)
    Lovely- Thank you for that compliment:)

    Rico-Thanks for being there for me:heart:
     
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    Hey SwtT,

    Time will heal all wounds of your heart. Hang in there and believe in who you are.

    Very hearfelt piece, girl!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    "I can cry as much as I want to...
    But I will never again hear his voice
    Stopped supportin me a while ago
    I'm suffering still from that choice" -SwtT

    Meanwhile, back at the computer
    We just love us some SwtT...
     
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    i feel ya gurl...
    time erases all pain...
    at least thats what they keep saying...
    peace
    khasm
     
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