Black Poetry : At least im ReAl!!!

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These r jus a few thoughts i had to write down..........enjoy!!!
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    Kick me
    that's what I said
    I don't care what you think
    It's all in your head
    You can pretend
    You're better then me
    but what it comes down to
    Is that you just can't see
    So go ahead
    Kick me down
    I don't care
    I'll never frown
    You are nothing
    Compared to me
    I can get up
    when you have to flee
    I will stand tall
    no matter the deal
    I don't care what you do
    because at least I'm real
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one whom real can't feel the kick
    those who try to kick slip every time short
    this was to the point and real i hear ya !!!!
    tyteeeeeeeeeeee!

    so go head kick me ........
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Powerful scribe! Lovin the energy.
     
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    re:Real

    This poem came from the soul. Excellent write.
     
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    Hold me down.
    Kick me around.
    I'll never frown.
    You just don't know
    You can't stop my flow. :nono:
    Because I'm Real.

    Very nice flow BlatinaPoet4u
     
  6. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx ya'll 4 the inspiration!!! :jump:
     
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    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that m y cuz reppin it well. i like it! :toast:
     
  8. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thnx cuzzin i love u too girl!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And that last line just brought it on home. Those who insisit on doing the kicking, are further down than you'll ever be. Tight piece poet.
     
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