Black Poetry : at last ( a duet with a friend)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nosrevi, Sep 28, 2003.

  1. Nosrevi

    Nosrevi Member MEMBER

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    "At Last"

    Nosrevi:
    Where did you come from?
    I've never seen a smile like yours.
    The brown skin queen
    With the purple lipstick
    Where did you come from?
    What took you so long to come to me?
    Maybe God was holding onto you until now

    Meli-D:
    Where have you been?
    I've looked everywhere for those eyes of yours
    The gentle ebony king
    with the poetic heart.
    Where have you been?
    Didn't you feel my soul crying out to you?
    Maybe God held on to you until now...

    Nosrevi:
    At last you're here.. i'm no longer longing..
    i look into your eyes.. that's when i know i wanna grow old with you.. when i hold your hands into mine it fits so perfectly.. like the piece of a puzzle that's finally complete..


    Meli-d:
    I can reach out and touch you...finally you're out of my dreams, in a reality that now is worth living, you're the one worth loving...i feel your arms around me, and my heart starts singing... that song i thought i'd never get to sing.

    Nosrevi:
    you're in my arms.. this is your sweet reality..
    from this day on .. we can start our journey..
    i want to make you laugh until you have tears in your eyes.. and your stomach hurts.. i want to love you more than you ever thought was possible.. i want to love you during the times you don't feel loveable.. lift you up again when you're down.. wipe your tears when you frown

    Meli-d:
    i won't walk away... i won't run from this love...
    in my heart forever...you will never have to wonder... i want to take care of your every need... bring you tears of joy... nurture your home... i will inspire you to do more than you ever imagined or dared to try. I want to give birth to your visions, even when you feel blind... be your helpmeet... and make your dreams come alive.

    Nosrevi:
    I can see our future before me... like a bright beam of shining light...
    for the first time ever, in my life... everything feels just right.


    Meli d:
    The heartaches I've journeyed through... the pain that's plagued my past...
    Matters not to me any longer, for my love has arrived AT LAST!

    Copyright ©2003 Nosrevi & MeliD
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A nice union of love.
    When two become one isn't there a flow unknown before.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte scribe u bring two together as one well
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a beautiful love story...nice collabo. much love
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so nice....much love yall
     
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