Black Poetry : At first

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At first…..
    I couldn’t believe
    I didn’t trust
    Scared of the feelings
    Hiding my love

    At first.....
    What you gave was
    so overwhelming
    unconditional
    time and love
    So good the thrill of it all
    That you loved me and only me..
    At first……

    Been through the storm
    And over the mountain
    So many times…
    And you came out
    like a story book charm
    and captured my heart
    running backwards as your
    pullin me forward…

    At first....
    not knowing which way to turn
    but where ever I go you held my
    hand
    lead me out my crazy world
    right in to yours…..

    At first….
    I loved you
    but back away scared
    of the hurt
    At first....
    yes...
    At first.....
    I knew you was the one... :luv:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very sweetly laid, keep flowing.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    nice piece mba...
    lovely sentiment...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome feeling ya heart speak here
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam
    love ya support and all
    means alot
    thanks again
    $$RICH$$
    KHASM
    WATZ
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    Thats so beautiful!
    And it flowed so sweetly!
    Went down like ice cream
    on a hot summers day!
    Beautiful scribe Ms.Angle!
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop, keep em coming
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SSSSWWWEEEEEETT I like this piece,
     
  9. ScorpioStylez

    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At first I didnt know if i should read this because it felt soo personal but as I read on i knew u were expressing your talents in depth
     
  10. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Innocently Sweet, My Dear! :heart: