Black Poetry : asylum

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  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i seek asylum...
    in the depth of your love for me
    i surrender my will to you
    i submit to what you want me to be
    am yours
    standing before you naked and unclean
    bathe me then
    show me what your word means

    i seek sanctuary...
    the silencing of voices within
    i seek your forgiveness
    i beg to start over again
    free me
    from the bars in my heart and mind
    unchain me
    let my past be left behind

    i ask for little
    but it means quite a lot
    i deserve nothing
    for the pain and suffering i've wrought
    but here i kneel
    am humbled by your wrath and glory
    wishing to see you
    ready to walk your path for me
    as sincere as i can be
    bless me
    i seek asylum...
    --MsDy







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  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Asylum Granted

    Sweeter than sweet! :star:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you brought this poem of surrender, well posed, keep flowing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was really a great smooth scribe love it
    keep flowing
     
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    WOW...

    This was...by far
    the most moving piece...
    I've read in a long time
    this touched me deeply...
    the sincerity and repentance
    leaped from each stanza...
    .....Beautiful...Absolutely Beautiful!
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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