Black Poetry : Assurance

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The feeling of alone that seems to plague,
    Constant thought of what to do and how to do it.
    Never a moment when you think it will all be OK.
    Remember that you are not all alone.
    No matter what the storm you are going through
    I’ll be your shelter.
    NO matter how many tears you cry I’ll be your shoulder.
    They say weeping may endure for a night
    But Joy cometh in the morning.
    Rest assured I’ll be there with you
    Through the sun setting and dawns early sunrise.
    I will he there to help you in anyway I can
    I am always some one you can turn to.
    Rest assured I am here.
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NIce drop in deed its a comferting feeling when you know that you have someone on your side.
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Again I say thanks for the luv Defiant.. Sometimes a person needs to hear what they already know that is why I called it Assurance...:shades:
     
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    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <appears suddenly>

    Sometimes even when we know we are not alone it is a comfort and a joy to be reassured. Enjoyed the read!

    Keep the words moving...

    <disappears into the night>
     
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    another good piece feeling this one poet. flo on, flo on.:spinn:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow awesome happy to see ya pen flowing again
     
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    Beautiful poet
    It is nice to have
    Someone you can rely on
    We all need a helping hand
    From time to time
    Much Love Poet
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is a nice drop.
    sometimes we all need that assurance.
     
  9. thatgirl74

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    Thank you
    Legend, Neva, Tantrum and Sweet glad that my words are heard by those who appreciate it.
    $$R$$ as always your feedback means so much I missed the oppurtunity
    to hear from you and I needed to get my self back into the flo..


    Smooches!!!
     
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    Was feeling the sentiments of this flow poet.
    flow on
    One love
     
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