Black Poetry : Aspire

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by arthur1210, Apr 30, 2005.

  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If her objective is to entice him
    He'll acknowledge, he is impressed
    The way she mingles and smiles excites him
    He feels need to see it expressed
    Staring at her slender frame delights him
    For she truly has been blessed
    He deliberates about it rightly
    Thus now, it's defining his quest

    Bold approaches are very unlike him
    Many interest are not confessed
    But, her exquisiteness incites him
    Along with the sexy scanty dress
    Wanting to feel what she'll provide him
    For, he's weary of efforts to guess
    Will he try to persuade her to invite him…
    With confidence of his success?

    All he'll need, this simple invitation
    Visit her home as her guest
    He'll make her aware of fascinations
    To fulfill her every request
    Of his wish to enrich all relations
    Of time he's willing to invest
    I'm sure he'll find proper motivation
    I'm sure she'll settle for nothing less

    He'll bring an abundance of imagination
    His advances will be at their best
    She'll know the extent of infatuation
    With the sincerity in his caress
    It's his resolve to show no hesitation
    While exploring ideas she suggests
    For, he aspires to see to her gratification
    Far more than these words can express

    JAG ©2005
     
  2. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I revised this one from an original post, just trying to get some thoughts
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    on point tyte write poet
    well done a hit this was smooth
     
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    This piece causes you to think. Makes me think about the love in my life.
    thanx for sharing.
     
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    Makes me think of a step early on in a relationship where both are trying to impress, in the hopes of taking yet another step. I enjoyed this flow poet.
     
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    Dang this is tight, A.
     
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