Black Poetry : Aspirations

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  1. mcookie

    mcookie New Member MEMBER

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    This is my first joint...so let me know whay ya think.

    Aspirations

    Lost im my own aspirations
    My heart's door closed
    I'm lost in the thought of your words
    Any reason to wavier last only a short while
    What do we want?
    How will this develop?
    Your every word stays with me
    But yet you leave
    Am I not the one you need?

    Lost in my own aspirations
    My heart's door closed
    Your presence sends chills down my spine
    Will we move forward?
    Dissipate as soulmates often do?

    I'm always lost in my own aspirations
    My aspiration is you
    My heart's door remains closed because you have the key
    When will you free me?
     
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    I liked this piece..Sad yes but the scribe was a nice one ;)
     
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    To yearn for what you don't yet have, yes, you captured this feeling well, most can relate to this poet.
     
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