Black Poetry : Ask request....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, May 3, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (ay whassup fam, this an oldie i dug up,
    had writ this to my ex b4 i had 2 exit...)

    Why Bother?
    The changes I go through to enrich our love
    leave me pondering on positives below and above
    From flesh fanatic to the fantastic fact
    that life's love leavin you would be flat
    Open up and ingest what all we have
    and things we're inspired to acquire, our halves
    No time to be tried an tormented with games
    I could possess a harem with more of the same
    Let's breathe life to romantic dreams
    encompassing all angles and filling to seams
    Constantly I'm called to return to the fields
    most femmes over keeled, never standing, forever kneeled
    Open you heart and cushion my home
    welcome my ways or sentence me to roam
    My pleas enter takin different flavors
    you taste as I come for you, but never savor
    Made just a man but for your touch
    time, mind, soul, from the same dust
    Relax and let's live, learn and give life
    enjoy our days together, as husband and wife...

    Your brother,


    One love,
    /antar
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wassup Ant feeling this piece
    flow on brotha:wink::wave:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This had such a mellow laid back feel to it, which is I suppose what you had requested, just to kick back and receive without stressing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the warm release from dis was awesome ...
    one of the classic from the files i c
    tyte
     
  5. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is...

    Wurd Brudda $$RICH$$ classic
    indeed

    Watz- you're exactly rite
    after all the insanities
    i jus wanted to chill

    thanks sensualreality for
    reachin out

    one love,
    /antar
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    several of the stanza's in this piece
    were engulfing...love the way you
    phased so many of the pleas to open
    up to love and exist beyond the
    basic level of just an ordinary relationship...

    Beautiful Work Antar :spinstar:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what can i say that have not been said
    this was tight
    loved it!!!
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop, Im def. feeling your flow
     
  9. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks
    :flamet: :flamet:
    had to buss
    rite quicc bb gg vv
     
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