Black Poetry : AsFIXiation

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm trembling like the leaves of an aspen
    flattened by the flutter of humidity of
    an aspirated wind ...

    remove me from your thoughts and
    retract what matters most
    from your conscience
    because it's killing me

    I can not bare to breathe
    my heart is to afraid to beat
    when I feel that you are
    smothering me

    dizzy
    room spinning
    four walls closing in
    the rug is being pulled from
    beneath the floor I stand upon
    and the ceiling is assiduously caving in

    Unconscious lover
    commits murder
    by
    stripping away
    the very oxygen
    that
    I need ...

    I like you
    but please -- just don't suffocate
    my feelings
    give me some room
    to continue to
    be me....



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2 !

    VIVID...VERY CLEAR CUT....EXCELLENT SUBJECT MATTER AS WELL.
    KEEP EM COMIN N2.

    PEACE
    G-MAN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HUMMMMMM!!

    U JUST TOOK ME IN 2 YO SOUL WIT THIS PIECE
    FLOW HEAD ON SIS.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW!!!!

    I'm as "asFIXiated" now as I was when first I read your mental!!!

    :heart: ya N2
    GQ
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooops! another bomb has been dropped...

    blak
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy~

    You deserve a hug! :wink:

    Thanks for your continual kindness ...

    Madd :heart: & RESPECT for you poet!
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY FAM...

    RICH How many ways can I say "thank you" ... hmmm ... just be a minute, let me count em' up!

    BLAK I won't say nothin ... no kissin' & tellin' ... only a big THANK YOU.... :wink:

    GQ I'm still fixated on you ... keep droppin' them scribez Boo!


    One Luv
    Three :heart:'s