Poetry Critiques : As We Strive...

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  1. One9_Arch

    One9_Arch Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As We Strive...


    Every word that I speak
    Is said to be a breach of the peace;
    And ever since I was a youngsta,
    My Freedom of Speech...

    Has been subjected to the limitations placed by my enemies.
    Will they ever let me speak my mind,
    And not try to kill me?

    Infringe my rights every chance they get.
    Don't wanna let me live my life,
    Demonstrate my strength.

    Assert my pride ... Evolution,
    I'm a dream realized;
    Speakin' knowledge in degrees-
    Acknowledge the Supreme Revolution:

    As We strive...

    To eradicate dissention among Our own.
    Sometimes, it is necessary for Children to leave there homes.
    And eventhough Our Mothers often weep;
    We realize, the battle will be won...
    But many will die sleep.

    See me killin' Illuminati-
    I separate the head from the body,
    And scatter it's Skull and Bones;
    From dusk 'til dawn they roam in seek
    To and fro for that 'Stone' in the 'Land Beyond the Sea.'

    Were life linear, I could put it all behind me.
    But livin' in the present,
    Seems the past is my destiny.
    Kemet's the Key,...

    Geographically mind-boggling.
    Reverse the Curse-
    Open ya eyes and see what you see.​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Forgeting one's past is like preparing to race not knowing where the starting line is. I feel a sense of pride and determination from your words.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    strive dat's never ending
     
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