Black Poetry : As We Lay

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Jun 4, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ceiling fan blades move quietly above our head
    We stare at its moving shadow that stays in one place
    The breeze fails to cool us
    But feels so good
    As we lay

    We've burned through the sheets
    A sweet, sweet burn
    Flames now pop in and out of thin air
    As we rest
    As we lay

    Our breathing synchronized
    In each other's mind the scene replays
    We squirm ever so slightly
    Feeling the realness of our glorious rhythm
    A sweet remembrance of the heated rush
    Pleasures of the body
    Replayed in multiples
    These are our thoughts
    As we lay

    We smile in love's afterglow
    Shoulder to shoulder
    Thigh to thigh
    In the heat of the day
    As we lay

    BE
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aawwwww

    ain't it grand
    to bask in the afterglow :love:
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful peace, BE. :heart:

    a
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say on my brotha!

    BEAUTIFUL FLOW!
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR PASSION FILLED HOUSE!
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One I missed...

    But not completely thanks to archives... another classic up from the basement. "As We Lay" Those three little words sound soul-good, coupled with the others... its all good! Nice flow!


    Feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this one slip by me and it was an treasure of beauty